今日の英作日記 duolingo
I've started doing duolingo for improving my English skills.
Sometimes there are some words I don't know, so it is useful.
And it let me know that my pronunciation is really bad.
After I talk with AI character Lily, this APP show me our conversation in text, then I realize that there are different words I talked.
I'm so sorry...
But talking with Lily is a good exercise for me because I have to do quick responce.
That means I have to create English sentences promptly.
That's hard.
chatGPTさんの修正です
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とてもよく書けていますね！👏✨
内容がしっかり伝わりますし、「自分の学習の気づき」を英語で表現できていて素晴らしいです。
より自然でこなれた英語にするとこんな感じになります👇
✨添削後のバージョン
I’ve started using Duolingo to improve my English skills.
Sometimes I come across words I don’t know, so it’s really useful.
It also makes me realize that my pronunciation is pretty bad.
After I talk with the AI character Lily, the app shows me our conversation in text, and then I realize that the words are different from what I actually said.
It’s a bit frustrating…
But talking with Lily is good practice for me because I have to respond quickly.
That means I need to create English sentences on the spot.
It’s tough.
🔎 ポイント解説
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doing Duolingo → using Duolingo
→ アプリを使う場合は use が自然です。
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for improving my English → to improve my English
→ 目的を表すときは「to + 動詞の原形」がより自然。
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And it let me know → It also makes me realize
→ より自然で生き生きした表現に。
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quick responce → quick response
→ スペル修正（“response”）。
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promptly → on the spot
→ 会話の場面で「すぐにその場で」という意味でよく使われます。
あなたのオリジナルもすごく伝わりますが、こう直すとネイティブが書く日記っぽくなりますよ✨
今日の英作日記 リメイクシート
Few days ago, I changed the cabinet doors in the toilet using for re-make masking tape.
Original doors were boring brown, then I changed them from brown to patterned design.
The design is by William Morris.
Also I changed knob, from not interesting design one to very cute one.
I really satisfied.
After I did, I went to the vathroom many time, but every I saw the doors, I feel happy.
うううひどいや
chatGPTさんに添削を依頼します
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全然「ひどい」なんてことないですよ〜！😊
言いたいことはしっかり伝わるし、とてもいい題材です✨
ちょっと表現や文法を自然に整えると、ぐっとネイティブっぽくなります。
✨ 添削後の自然なバージョン
A few days ago, I redecorated the cabinet doors in my bathroom using decorative masking tape.
The original doors were a plain, boring brown, so I changed them to a patterned design.
The pattern is by William Morris.
I also replaced the knobs, switching from a dull design to some very cute ones.
I’m really satisfied with the result.
Since then, I’ve found myself going to the bathroom more often—every time I see the doors, I feel happy.
📝 ポイント解説
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Few days ago → A few days ago
“few” は「ほとんどない」、“a few” で「いくつかある」。今回は a few days ago。
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using for re-make masking tape → “using decorative masking tape”
「リメイク用のマステ」→英語では “decorative masking tape” が自然。
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Original doors were boring brown → “The original doors were a plain, boring brown”
形容詞をつけてリズムを整えるとぐっと自然。
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changed them from brown to patterned design → “changed them to a patterned design”
“from A to B” も使えるけどここはシンプルに。
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Also I changed knob → “I also replaced the knobs”
“replace” は「取り替える」意味でぴったり。
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I really satisfied → “I’m really satisfied (with the result)”
“be satisfied” の形にするのが正解。
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vathroom → bathroom 😊
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every I saw → every time I saw
💡 この日記、雰囲気がすごく可愛いので、もう少し「嬉しくてニヤニヤしてしまう感じ」を強調したバージョンも作れます。
作ってみますか？
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よっしゃ〜🤭✨
それでは「可愛くリメイクできて、トイレに行くたびにニヤニヤしてしまう」雰囲気を強調した ニヤニヤバージョン を書いてみますね！
🤭 ニヤニヤ強めバージョン
A few days ago, I gave the cabinet doors in my bathroom a little makeover with some decorative masking tape.
The doors used to be this dull brown, but now they’ve got a beautiful patterned design by William Morris.
I even swapped out the boring old knobs for some super cute ones.
Honestly, I can’t stop grinning at them.
Ever since I finished, I keep finding excuses to go to the bathroom—every time I see those doors, they make me smile.
Who knew cabinet doors could bring me this much joy?
📝 ニヤニヤポイント
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gave … a little makeover → 「ちょっとリメイク」感を可愛く表現
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super cute → ネイティブが「めっちゃ可愛い！」っていう時の口語
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Honestly, I can’t stop grinning at them. → ニヤニヤ度MAX
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keep finding excuses → 「つい口実を見つけて行っちゃう」＝うれしすぎて何度も見に行く感じ
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Who knew … ? → 「こんなに幸せになるなんて誰が想像した？」っていうニュアンス
読み返すとほんとにトイレに行くたびに「うふふ☺️」ってしてる姿が浮かびます✨
いやー勉強になります
今日の英作日記 英語の勉強
Recently I focus to do studying English.
First, I'm writing this English dialy, second, I'm using iPhoine app "duolingo".
In duoingo, I can talk with AI character Lilly.
She is cynical character, if I can't say interesting reply to her question, she will be bad mood.
Until now, talking with her is success, but sometimes I can't say the right pronunciation.
Furthermore, sometimes I can't enderstand what she said.
Using this app, I can study listening, speaking, vocabulary, etc.
I'd like to continue to use this app and I'd like to improve my English skills.
今回全然上手く書けてないのは自覚済み
chatGPTさんに聞いてみます
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わかりました！
文章の意味はしっかり伝わっていますが、自然な英語に整えて、読みやすく・表現の幅も少し広げたバージョンに直してみますね。
Corrected & Natural Version
Recently, I’ve been focusing on studying English.
First, I write this English diary. Second, I use the iPhone app Duolingo.
On Duolingo, I can talk with an AI character named Lilly. She has a cynical personality, and if I can’t give an interesting reply to her questions, she gets into a bad mood.
So far, my conversations with her have been going well, but sometimes I can’t pronounce words correctly.
Furthermore, there are times when I can’t understand what she says.
By using this app, I can practice listening, speaking, vocabulary, and more.
I’d like to keep using this app and continue improving my English skills.
今日の英作日記 バスケ
Now, I'm watching the basketball Asia League on TV.
I think this team is not so strong, and I've heard that Iran is so strong, but this match is good.
Especially, Tominaga is so good!
He is making a lot of three-point-shoot!
He is on fire!!
He is unstoppable!!
By the way, this TV channel offers the quiz dualing the game, about this game.
For example, who makes a first point, or, which team is ahead? or, till end of this quater how point 差があるか and so on.
If I got 20,000 points won the quiz, I can apply for the award like player's signed shirt.
Then I want to win, so I wish that "Please don't get a point now! Because I want to win to the quiz."
I'd like to cheer my favorite team, but I'd like to apply for award them I wish not good for them.
It's really ジレンマ!!!
今日は表現がわからなすぎて日本語が混ざっちゃった
chatGPTさんよろしくです
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わかりました。今回の日記は、元の楽しげな雰囲気をそのまま活かしつつ、自然な英語に直しますね。特にスポーツ観戦やクイズ部分の表現を、英語らしくスムーズにしました。
Corrected version
Right now, I’m watching the Basketball Asia League on TV.
I don’t think this team is very strong, and I’ve heard that Iran is really strong, but this match is exciting.
Especially Tominaga—he’s amazing!
He’s sinking a lot of three-pointers!
He’s on fire!!
He’s unstoppable!!
By the way, this TV channel offers quizzes during the game about the match.
For example: Who will score the first point? Or Which team will be ahead? Or What will be the point difference by the end of this quarter?, and so on.
If I get 20,000 quiz points, I can apply for prizes like a player’s signed shirt.
So now I’m like, “Please don’t score right now! I want to win the quiz!”
I want to cheer for my favorite team, but at the same time, I want to win the prize—so I end up wishing something bad for them.
It’s such a dilemma!!!
今回のポイント
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three-point-shoot → three-pointer（バスケでは「three-pointer」が自然）
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「彼がたくさん入れてる」は He’s sinking a lot of three-pointers や He’s making a lot of three-pointers と言える
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「クイズ dualing the game」は quizzes during the game
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「till end of this quater how point 差があるか」は What will be the point difference by the end of this quarter?
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「I wish not good for them」は I end up wishing something bad for them にすると自然
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ジレンマはそのまま dilemma でOK
今日の英作日記 ゼルダの伝説
Since I was a child, I liked playing video games.
My most favorite game series is Fire emblem, next is Final Fantasy 7.
The Ledend of Zelda series is also my favorite, but some of them are really difficult to play for me.
The difficult points are like vowing on the horse.
Or racing in the snow mountain.
I hate action games, so some games of Zelda, I couldn't finish.
Then when "The Legend of Zelda: Bless of the Wild" was released, I wasn't interested in.
But I heard that the game became so popular.
It got the game award of the year.
Then I've started to play it since a month ago.
Then I realized that if I am not good at doing action, I can avoid this.
So I can enjoy this game so far.
Now I'm regret that why I didn't start to play this game from earlier.
ちょっと雑になったかな( ´•ᴗ•ก )💦
chatGPTさんに聞いてみます
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英語日記、久しぶりですね！✨
丁寧に書かれていて、気持ちもよく伝わってきます。
ただ、より自然で正確な表現にするために、少し文法や語順を直してみました。以下が添削・改善案です👇
✅ 添削後の日記（自然でこなれた英語に修正）
Since I was a child, I’ve liked playing video games.
My all-time favorite game series is Fire Emblem, followed by Final Fantasy VII.
I also like The Legend of Zelda series, but some of the games are really difficult for me to play.
The difficult parts include things like horseback archery and racing down snowy mountains.
I don’t like action games, so there were some Zelda games I couldn’t finish.
So when The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild was released, I wasn’t interested at first.
But I heard it became very popular and even won Game of the Year.
About a month ago, I finally started playing it.
Then I realized that even if I’m not good at action gameplay, I can find ways to avoid it.
So far, I’ve been able to enjoy the game a lot.
Now, I regret not having started it sooner.
✏️ ポイント解説
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“I’ve liked”：子供のころからずっと好き→現在完了が自然。
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“all-time favorite”：最も好きなものに使う自然な表現。
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“followed by”：順番を言うときの英語らしい表現。
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“horseback archery”：文法的には “vowing on the horse” は不自然な表現。おそらく「馬上での弓矢」？
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“racing down snowy mountains”：より自然な英語に。
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“wasn’t interested in” → “wasn’t interested at first”：「in」が必要ですが、「at first」を加えると文の流れがより自然に。
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“I regret that why I didn’t start…” → “I regret not having started…”：後悔を表す自然な構文。
丁寧に書かれていて、英語の力が確実についてきているのを感じますよ😊
今回の表現はすぐに他でも応用できるものばかりなので、ぜひ覚えてみてくださいね！
もっと日記を書きたくなったら、いつでもお手伝いします📘✨
今日の英作日記 主治医の産休
When I went to the hospital, my doctor told me about her absence in next few months.
She is pregnant and she said she wants to get back to this hospital after her childbirth.
I was so surprised, because I thought she is almost same age of me, but she was younger than me at least ten years, ...maybe.
She has position, skills, brain as a doctor, and she has her husband and she'll have baby!!
She has everything!!!
I'm not envy her but I was impressed that there are many woman like her and they are totally different from me.
The world is wide.
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chatGPTさんの添削です
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おはようございます！今回も英語日記ありがとうございます😊
前向きな気持ちと、素直な驚きや感動が伝わるとてもいい文章でした！
文法や表現にいくつか自然に聞こえるように整えたい部分があったので、丁寧に添削させていただきますね。
✏️添削後の自然な英語表現：
When I went to the hospital, my doctor told me she would be absent for the next few months.
She’s pregnant, and she said she wants to come back to this hospital after giving birth.
I was so surprised because I thought she was about the same age as me, but it turned out she was at least ten years younger… maybe.
She has a position, skills, and brains as a doctor. She has a husband, and soon she’ll have a baby!!
She has everything!!!
I’m not envious of her, but I was amazed that there are women like her who are completely different from me.
The world is wide.
📝解説ポイント：
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“about her absence in next few months” → “she would be absent for the next few months”
“in next few months”はやや不自然で、“for the next few months（今後数か月間）”の方が自然です。
また、“told me about her absence”よりも “told me she would be absent” の方が英語らしい表現です。
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“after her childbirth” → “after giving birth”
“childbirth”は名詞で使えますが、“after giving birth”の方が日常会話では自然です。
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“almost same age of me” → “about the same age as me”
比較のときは “the same age as” が正しいです。
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“position, skills, brain” → “a position, skills, and brains”
「brains（知性・頭の良さ）」は複数形で使うことが多く、“a position”（役職）も冠詞をつけた方が自然です。
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“I’m not envy her” → “I’m not envious of her”
“envy”は動詞なので使うなら “I don’t envy her.”
形容詞なら “envious” → “I’m not envious of her.”
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“they are totally different from me”
そのままでも伝わりますが、とても自然で良い表現です！
✅採点（10点満点）
🌟8.5 / 10 点！
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内容はとてもよく書けていて、感情も伝わってきます！
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文法と語法の面で少しだけ不自然な箇所がありましたが、大きな誤解を招くような間違いではありません。
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表現力は◎。最後の「The world is wide.」もあなたらしくて素敵です。
次回の日記も楽しみにしています😊
学習の姿勢がとても素晴らしいです！引き続き応援しています📚✨
今日の英作日記 お腹の出っ張りについての原因
Yesterday, I went to the hospital to hear the result of CT scan.
The reason for taking CT scan was to check if I have another breast cancer or not.
The result for that, I'm going to hear next month from a doctor from breast surgery.
Yesterday, I heard about what my lump is from a doctor from plastic surgery.
My doctor explained about my lump, that's cause of water, then she put the water from my belly using an injection.
I was afraid that I was stabbed the injection without anesthesia, but it wasn't so painful.
I was able to see she was satisfied that she could did something to my lump, but I wasn't satisfied because my appearance was not changed.
Still, I can see there is a lump in my belly.
By the way, the doctor said that having this symptom is very rare case among people who underwent re-constract of the breast surgery.
My breast cancer was rare type and having this symptom is rare ... I'm so a rare person!
下記chatGPTさんの修正です
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ありがとうございます！今回の日記も丁寧に書かれていて、内容もよく伝わってきます😊
以下に、自然な英語表現への添削とアドバイスをお送りしますね！
✏️ 添削後の英文（日記）
Yesterday, I went to the hospital to hear the results of my CT scan.
The reason I had the scan was to check whether I might have another case of breast cancer.
I’ll get the results regarding that from a breast surgeon next month.
Yesterday, I spoke with a plastic surgeon about the lump on my belly.
She explained that the lump was caused by fluid buildup, and she removed the fluid using a syringe.
I was afraid it would hurt because she didn’t use any anesthesia, but it wasn’t as painful as I’d feared.
I could tell she was satisfied that she had done something about the lump, but I wasn’t satisfied because my appearance hadn’t changed.
There’s still a visible lump on my belly.
By the way, the doctor told me that this symptom is very rare among people who’ve undergone breast reconstruction surgery.
My breast cancer type was rare, and now I have a rare symptom too… I must be one of a kind! 😅
📝 ポイント解説
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元の表現 |
添削後の表現 |
解説 |
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hear the result of CT scan |
hear the results of my CT scan |
“Results” は複数形が一般的（複数の情報が出るため）＋”my” を加えると自然 |
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if I have another breast cancer or not |
whether I might have another case of breast cancer |
“whether” の方が自然＋ “another case of” をつけて文脈を明確に |
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I’m going to hear next month from a doctor from breast surgery |
I’ll get the results regarding that from a breast surgeon next month |
表現をスムーズに、“a doctor from breast surgery” は少しかたい |
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she put the water from my belly using an injection |
she removed the fluid using a syringe |
“put the water from” → 誤用（正しくは “remove fluid”）・“injection” → 通常「注射」の意味になるため、ここでは “syringe（注射器）” を使用 |
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stabbed the injection |
stabbed with the injection |
正しくは “stabbed with”（〜で刺される） |
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she could did something |
she could do something |
助動詞の後は原形（“could did” はNG） |
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because my appearance was not changed |
because my appearance hadn’t changed |
“not changed” より “hadn’t changed”（過去完了）が自然 |
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I’m so a rare person |
I must be one of a kind! |
直訳だと少し不自然。ネイティブ風にすると “one of a kind”（唯一無二の存在）などが自然でユーモアも伝わります😊 |
💡今回もとてもがんばっていて、文意がしっかり伝わるよい日記でした！
もし「再建手術を受けた人の中でも稀な症状」と表現したい場合、こんな言い方もあります：
“This is a very rare case even among those who’ve had breast reconstruction.”
ご希望があれば、10点満点の採点とコメントもできますので、お知らせください🌟
採点をお願いした
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もちろんです！では、いつものように添削・自然な英語への修正、その後に採点とコメントをお送りします 😊
✏️ 修正後の自然な英文：
My English Diary – July 30th
Yesterday, I went to the hospital to hear the results of my CT scan.
The scan was done to check whether I might have another case of breast cancer.
I’ll hear the results of that from the breast surgery doctor next month.
Yesterday, I met with a plastic surgeon, who explained what the lump in my belly is.
She said it was caused by fluid buildup, and she removed the fluid using a syringe.
I was scared because she did it without anesthesia, but it wasn’t very painful.
I could tell she felt satisfied that she was able to do something about the lump, but I wasn’t satisfied, because my appearance didn’t change at all.
There’s still a visible lump in my belly.
By the way, the doctor told me that this kind of symptom is very rare among people who have undergone breast reconstruction surgery.
My type of breast cancer was rare, and this symptom is rare too…
I must be a super rare person!
📝 コメント & 解説：
💡 良かった点：
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内容がとてもよく伝わりました。事実・感情・医療的な説明がバランスよく盛り込まれています！
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「rare」を最後に繰り返して締めるのは、英語的にもユーモアがあって良い表現でした。
🔧 改善ポイント：
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「hear the result of CT scan」→ 正しくは「results of my CT scan」と冠詞や複数形の扱いに注意。
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「that’s cause of water」→ 「it was caused by fluid buildup」のように、受動態＋自然な表現が必要。
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「she put the water from my belly」→ 「she removed the fluid」など、目的語や動詞が自然な表現に。
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「she could did」→ 「could do」が正解（助動詞＋原形）。
🏅 採点（10点満点中）：
8.3点！
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内容：9.5点（伝えたいことがしっかり伝わってくる！）
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文法・自然さ：7.5点（小さなミスがいくつかありましたが、意味は十分通じました）
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構成：8.0点（時系列も明確で、読みやすい流れでした）
🌸 英語で日記を書く習慣、本当に素晴らしいです。少しずつ表現が自然になってきていて、感情の描写もとても良くなっています！
次も楽しみにしていますね 😊
