今日の英作日記 リメイクシート
Few days ago, I changed the cabinet doors in the toilet using for re-make masking tape.
Original doors were boring brown, then I changed them from brown to patterned design.
The design is by William Morris.
Also I changed knob, from not interesting design one to very cute one.
I really satisfied.
After I did, I went to the vathroom many time, but every I saw the doors, I feel happy.
うううひどいや
chatGPTさんに添削を依頼します
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全然「ひどい」なんてことないですよ〜！😊
言いたいことはしっかり伝わるし、とてもいい題材です✨
ちょっと表現や文法を自然に整えると、ぐっとネイティブっぽくなります。
✨ 添削後の自然なバージョン
A few days ago, I redecorated the cabinet doors in my bathroom using decorative masking tape.
The original doors were a plain, boring brown, so I changed them to a patterned design.
The pattern is by William Morris.
I also replaced the knobs, switching from a dull design to some very cute ones.
I’m really satisfied with the result.
Since then, I’ve found myself going to the bathroom more often—every time I see the doors, I feel happy.
📝 ポイント解説
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Few days ago → A few days ago
“few” は「ほとんどない」、“a few” で「いくつかある」。今回は a few days ago。
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using for re-make masking tape → “using decorative masking tape”
「リメイク用のマステ」→英語では “decorative masking tape” が自然。
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Original doors were boring brown → “The original doors were a plain, boring brown”
形容詞をつけてリズムを整えるとぐっと自然。
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changed them from brown to patterned design → “changed them to a patterned design”
“from A to B” も使えるけどここはシンプルに。
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Also I changed knob → “I also replaced the knobs”
“replace” は「取り替える」意味でぴったり。
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I really satisfied → “I’m really satisfied (with the result)”
“be satisfied” の形にするのが正解。
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vathroom → bathroom 😊
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every I saw → every time I saw
💡 この日記、雰囲気がすごく可愛いので、もう少し「嬉しくてニヤニヤしてしまう感じ」を強調したバージョンも作れます。
作ってみますか？
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よっしゃ〜🤭✨
それでは「可愛くリメイクできて、トイレに行くたびにニヤニヤしてしまう」雰囲気を強調した ニヤニヤバージョン を書いてみますね！
🤭 ニヤニヤ強めバージョン
A few days ago, I gave the cabinet doors in my bathroom a little makeover with some decorative masking tape.
The doors used to be this dull brown, but now they’ve got a beautiful patterned design by William Morris.
I even swapped out the boring old knobs for some super cute ones.
Honestly, I can’t stop grinning at them.
Ever since I finished, I keep finding excuses to go to the bathroom—every time I see those doors, they make me smile.
Who knew cabinet doors could bring me this much joy?
📝 ニヤニヤポイント
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gave … a little makeover → 「ちょっとリメイク」感を可愛く表現
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super cute → ネイティブが「めっちゃ可愛い！」っていう時の口語
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Honestly, I can’t stop grinning at them. → ニヤニヤ度MAX
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keep finding excuses → 「つい口実を見つけて行っちゃう」＝うれしすぎて何度も見に行く感じ
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Who knew … ? → 「こんなに幸せになるなんて誰が想像した？」っていうニュアンス
読み返すとほんとにトイレに行くたびに「うふふ☺️」ってしてる姿が浮かびます✨
いやー勉強になります
